A review of On Hold
On Hold
Synopsis
A father. One impossible day. And a single phone call that could change everything.
Critic Score
★★★★☆ 4.0
Audience Score
★★★★★ 4.5
(11 ratings)
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Before I review any film, I watch it at least twice. This was an easy watch with only 16 minutes runtime, so I watched it three times. Here is my take on this film…
On Hold does something a lot of short films try and fail to do: it trusts silence. So much of the runtime is spent in the pauses between what’s said, and that’s where the real performance lives. There’s no rush to explain anything to you, no expository dialogue holding your hand through the emotional beats. The film assumes you’re smart enough to feel your way through it, and that’s rare for something this short.
What struck me most on the first watch was the restraint. A lot of filmmakers working in this emotional register overcorrect, they lean into melodrama because they’re worried the audience won’t feel enough on their own. This does the opposite. The camera holds on faces a beat longer than you expect, lets a silence sit uncomfortably before someone finally speaks, and that discomfort is doing narrative work.
By the second watch I was paying less attention to what was happening and more to how it was being framed, the blocking, Rodney’s emotion.
The third watch is where the sound design really opened up for me. The hold music truly started to annoy me and at first, I was bothered. Then I realized that was the intention. If it bothered me, it for sure bothered Rodney.
For a film this short, it doesn’t feel like it’s racing a clock. A lot of shorts either try to cram a feature’s worth of plot into fifteen minutes or they pad things out because they’re scared of feeling slight. This one understands its own scale. It picks one true thing and sits with it, and because of that restraint, it actually lingers with you longer than films three times its length.
If I have a note, I feel when the lights were cut and the call disconnected, Rodney could have been even more angry. I would have loved to see an explosion moment from him.
Overall I really enjoyed this work.
A real story that happens to real people — I appreciate everything about this short film. I could feel the everyday pressures of navigating adulthood caving in on the character. Great work Ronnie, Blake, and the entire cast/crew.